No Secondary Characters? No Problem!
By Natalie-Nicole Bates
It wasn’t until I finished my paranormal novella,
SEE ME, that I realized I had no real secondary characters in the story. Sure,
there was an occasional passer-by that my hero and/or heroine had words with,
but no real friend lending advice or sympathetic ear. No one for the reader to
gain added insight from.
So this caused me to ponder the question, Are secondary characters really necessary
for every story?
I looked to my hero and heroine and their individual
circumstances. Both characters were solitary beings. Prior to the start of SEE
ME, hero Daniel Tremont had not left his flat for a decade.
SEE ME occurs over a very short period of time—two
days in the hero and heroine’s lives. But those two days will change Carly and
Daniel forever.
I soon came to realize that the beauty of no
secondary characters is that this sole focus of the story is on Carly and
Daniel. Their discovery of one another and their situations. There’s no
distraction of phone calls or visitors interrupting their flow.
So the lack of secondary characters has turned into
a pleasant discovery for my writing. I hope you will agree. SEE ME is now
available from Leap of Faith Publishing or your favourite online book store.
Blurb:
Carly
Anders is hearing voices in her head.
Another one of her kind is trying to contact her. She knows of the malevolent freaks—others who are eternal
like her and seek out the weak to inflict pain upon. For years, Carly has held
up huge protective walls to keep herself and her secrets safe. Now, physically
and mentally exhausted, Carly needs protection and rest
.
She
accepts the invitation to visit an internet friend who needs help appraising a
collection of antique photographs. The
situation is not ideal, but Carly hopes a male presence in her life will deter
the determined suitor who haunts her thoughts and dreams.
Daniel
Tremont is not what Carly is expecting.
The
former funeral director has a secret of his own. Not only is he eternal like
Carly, he is her creation from all those years before—her abomination she
thought she killed.
Daniel
has been searching for Carly for years. He knows she is the piece of his life
that he has been missing for so long. Now that he has found her, he has no
intentions of letting her go.
Excerpt:
Her long, straight mane of hair was the color of fallen oak leaves and
dusted with gold. Her eyes were a deep espresso brown. An amber briolette hung
at her throat. She wore a form fitting purple sweater that hugged her ample
curves, and a matching skirt that fell a few inches above her knees. A pair of
heels completed the outfit. Her suitcase and handbag sat at her feet.
Even though he wanted
nothing more at that moment than to engulf her petite figure in his embrace, he
extended his hand to her. His tongue finally untied and he said the first thing
that he could think of at that dizzying, long-awaited moment. “I’m so glad you
decided to come.”
She smiled, and his knees
weakened. As soon as their hands joined, a jolt of electricity fired, sending
them both into a stumble.
Shocked, he said nothing
and stared at his still outstretched hand. She laughed, a merry sound that
filled the hallway and caused his shock to melt away.
“Wow, that was strange!”
she exclaimed.
“I just had the carpets
steamed today.” He rubbed his hands against the denim fabric of his jeans. I
suppose they picked up a static charge, I’m so sorry about that,” he said.
Was it just static
electricity? Did he just shock an innocent girl, or was two of the same kind
coming together? He gazed at her perfectly painted purple lips. If just their hands coming together caused this kind of reaction, what would happen if they kissed?
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3 comments:
I hadn't really considered that there were no secondary characters until you mentioned it. I guess that's true, although I kind of considered Xander and Jamie as secondary characters...even though they had no physical roles, they were mentioned often enough.
I loved the story and I think it made sense that there were no secondary characters.
~Veronica Vasquez~
Sometimes it's what we are, a solitary being forced to do socializing with the world. It would feel awkward, isn't it?
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